WALT: use speech marks
Remember to:
- put speech marks around the words being spoken.
- punctuate the speech before closing speech marks.
- start a new line for each new speaker
Top Tip: Start by describing the sounds you might be hearing or describing the problem on the spaceship.
Moon Landing
“Houston come in Houston”, “yes What is it Apollo 11”, “were landing!!”, “OK, we have successfully landed”,and as soon as i said that the emergency alarm goes off “houston houston we have an emergency”,”what is it Apollo 11”,’there's an alien and it’s black and has another alien in its mouth and it’s nice” OK so what's the emergency” oooooooohhhhhhh the alien took our spaceship” What how are you gonna get back to earth” “um o yeah the alien took us in the ship and we just landed on earth and we brought moon rocks like we were supposed too. the end,
Hi ryleigh i think you did goodin this slide but you could make it a little shorter
ReplyDeleteHI,👑👑👑😎,Its Chelsy In Room 23, I love the link that is on your blog post!! ❤💕😄
ReplyDeleteHi Chelsy from room 23, why do you have a love heart emoji at the end?😕
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