Thursday 24 October 2019

Who Am I

WALT: write a character portrait.
Remember to show don't tell:
  1. how they look, sound, smell
  2. how they speak, move and act.
  3. How they behave towards others.
  4. about their belongings and the environment they are in.

  1. First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
  2. Second paragraph - describe the behaviour - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
  3. Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
  4. Fourth paragraph  - describe the character  belongings and environment.


Who am i? 1. I am as yellow as a banana and i have black stripes on me and my voice can be low pitched and high pitched  

2. I can move around very quickly and be very stealthy when i'm in a certain form

3. He helps protect mankind from all the dangers of the world 

4. Their environment used to be _______ but now its earth 



This is my Who am i 
Try and guess who it is Or what it is 
Hope you enjoy.


1 comment:

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