Who Am I

WALT: write a character portrait.

Remember to show don't tell:

1. how they look, sound, smell
2. how they speak, move and act.
3. How they behave towards others.
4. about their belongings and the environment they are in.

1. First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
2. Second paragraph - describe the behaviour - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
3. Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
4. Fourth paragraph  - describe the character  belongings and environment.

Who am i? 1. I am as yellow as a banana and i have black stripes on me and my voice can be low pitched and high pitched  

2. I can move around very quickly and be very stealthy when i'm in a certain form

3. He helps protect mankind from all the dangers of the world 

4. Their environment used to be _______ but now its earth 

This is my Who am i 

Try and guess who it is Or what it is 

Hope you enjoy.

In the holidays

In the holidays I went to go see the movie Take home pay.It was the best movie I ever saw 

It was funny and i really recommend you see it 

Why i liked the movie

1. because it was funny and cool 

2. it was based in Auckland 

3. Its just a good movie